I can't personally connect to some of what you said in this rhyme, but the way you put things helped me to see what you meant. A lot of the images were very tight. Nothing was glamorized or blown out of proportion, just stated plainly. My only problem was some of the lines didn't quite rhyme right.

Quote of Note...
and these little girls rapidly havin littles girls//
they little world is paused cus they opened they thighs//
makin it worse fa they moms now they sleepin out side//
Now that's harsh.

Peace