Voted For: Lyrical Disciple

you have no real lyrical talent itz all played and fake/
quit rappin before you bring it down plz for all our sake/
i spit 15 lines all the time cuz i'm good when i rhyme/
bitch resign from rap cuz you suck and aint devine/
dont fuck wit a solja or get left at the crib all wet/
why the fuck you here you hardly have any respect/
you'll never be legendary or scary can never marry/
disrespect you like i disrespect that pussie john kerry/
i'll win be sure to that cuz votez for me aint vary/
dont act all gangsta man you prolly never carried/
you aint a disciple of lyrical skillz your a dip shit/
pay attention bitch clit is what i git even wit the clip/
i believe in hand to hand combat witch you wont understand/
your worth nothing but a cent while i'm worth more than 100 grand/
you think you gonna win i'll beat -u- where you stand/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WHOOOOOOOO NICE FLOW AND "OK" PUNCHES BUT DA FLOW WAS AWSOME NICE MAYNE



he say he from "West Side" in "tha Hood"
nigga ill "break" you in half like "wood"1
say he a "kript" he mean "kriptonite"
sit back and watch as i "blow" ya spot up like "dynamite"
he say he "killin suckers" he means "lolly pops"2
imma murk this nigga so bad he gone run to tha cops
this nigga still in "school" and he fuckin with me 3
payin is tha only time he holds a titty
pay attention when you battlin tha King
ill teach you lessons that will make ya head ring
he clain he "real dope" but he smoke to much "dope"4
tha slick this "rope around ya neck" will make you "choke"
"West_Side_Kript" got tha "underscores" cuzz he way down "under"
ill Plunder his rekord and make him wonder
cant think cuzz im "roarin" louder then "thunder"
have him underground like "tupac"5
keep fuckin around you''ll get got 6
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE MAYNE GOOD PUNCHES NICE PERSONALS GOOD FLOW GOING NICE


V-LYRICAL DISCIPLE CAUSE HE HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES

WEST-NICE FLOW AND "OK" PUNCHES BUT U DIDNT HAD NO PERSONALS AND DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT
BUT DA FLOW WAS NICE~!

KEEP IT UP MAYNE THROW HARDER PUNCHES "OK"

LYRICAL DISCIPLE- KEEP USIN DEM PERSONALS AND PUNCHES

~PEACE~!

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