View Single Post
Old 10-14-04, 10:38 PM   #15
Nynth Degree
In ya area.
 
Posts: 1,479
IP:

Voted For: A.K.A.

Ok, Elusiv had better structure first of all. A.K.A your lines were a little stretched at times, work on shortening them down. Elusiv, your punches were a little weak, and you had some played concepts. Voting is opinionated, and in my opinion talking blatently about guns is played...You didn't really come with any wordplay either, and this was just about the only good punch in your verse:
15years old, telling us your hobbies are fucking and shagging
Your 15, ur dick aint devloped enough for truth 2 be behind ur bragging//
And when it came to your finisher, council and anvil don't rhyme, just letting you know...
A.K.A you came with some aight wordplay, I was feeling the "Hollow wean" line, but other than that you were kinda lacking in the wordplay. As far as punches, it didn't look like you put much effort into them, but this was your best one...
if you a "g" it must stand for girl cause you a chike that love sucking dick//
this ain't no crew battle. i talk to emp he said you ain't part of his clique//
V// A.K.A

(For future referrence kids, don't put the "//" at the end of your lines, it's newbish)
Return the favor at one of the links in my sig, honest explained votes only...
__________________
If you consider 4/20 a holiday, you probably smoke more crack than weed.
Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
ninth your a fucking idiot and im purposly spelling your name wrong...


PS, no Sony.