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Old 10-14-04, 11:20 PM   #10
BkBrawla
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Lil Bitch, Lil Bitch where u Truly At?/1
This Foo's runnin scared that I'll Whip him harder with a Belt then his Dad...2

HotnessDefined the lyrical "Star" Now u Back/3
Though he really da King "Wackness" & now he about 2 get his Tittle Back...4

2 Win me u Probly Biting-&-Recycling Instead of Loosin/5
LIke a girl u Spend yo day, yo clothes Choosin..6

"What Kind of a Skirt & Tanktop should i Be Wearing"/ by (HOtnessDefined)7
Ya Gay, u Plainly "Wack" u can't Rap thats what i Be Sayin...8

Now foo Don't Rap, don't Try 2 be Hot-Shot/9
Especially while yo Dad found u Masturbatin in ya Room
Dumb Fuck...10

dat's my verse
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE~! GOOD "OK' PUNCHES ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES AND NICE FLOW GOOD PERSONALS&PUNCHES



fukkin youngtsah/
go with your toys/
dont make me call my boys/
well fuck u up/
piss on u then ask ur mom what is up/
run hide duck duck, i dunt give a fuck/
ur a faggot with a bald head/
receding at a early age u may aswell b dead

^^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" NOT AN GOOD VERSE HERE OK FLOW BUT NO PUNCHES NO PERSONALS NO STRUTURE BASICALLY YO VERSE WASNT GOOD AT ALL ELEVATE "OK" U NEED TO GET HELP ASK ONE OF DA VETS TO HELP U.

V-LIL YOUNG CAUSE OF HARDER ALL AROUND BETTA VERSE

HOTTNESS-U NEED TO ELEVATE MAD "OK" I SEEN YO BATTLES UR NOT PUTTIN AN EFFECT ON PUNCHES AND FLOW NOR PERSONALS,,,,,,,,LOOK I'LL HELP U BUT U GOTS TO RESPECT PEOPLE

~PEACE~

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