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Old 10-15-04, 12:38 AM   #18
streetryda
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Voted For: Myth

aight ima break it down

u fucked up, cause now ya skating on thin ice like penguins
no food, starve u of a w, so ya wins won't grow like a gremlin
^^aight nice oppener and nice personal 7/10
battling me why? kid ain't u stationed in the wrong hemisphere? *
fag? if we battled face to face he would show up in tennis gear
here's some advice and tips for ya, fear me like ya fear god son
pick run around in speedo's, masks and capes like batman and robin
u a bitch prissy with ya rhymes but they do seem a bit tacky
kid complains this ain't "fare" so he's trying to switch "taxi's"
^^ aight i liked the over all flow and creativeness in these lines..nice punches 8/10
u've been battling for years and years so u could gain experience *
ya purchased ya rhymes from value city when they went on clearance
receiving roses from men? ice pick the gay version of the bacehlor
punches are my ingredients to putting slits in ya body like a spatula
i'll do u a favor and open ya casket for ya like tales from the crypt *
str8, debatable? if u got a girl then my semens being mailed to her tit
^^aight this was okay nice flow but umm seems like u just tryed to rhyme tit with crypt it didnt make much sense but i get the personals..nice 6/10
dad? rumor is ya 24 yrs old so in that case i'm jacking, i'll rob ya son *
kid ya rhymes ain't accepted like white leagues rejected jackie robinson
^^nice closer ot feeling the personal too much but the fact u put it in there and punch was nice...7/10

over all verse 28/40

ok on to ice pick

Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
^^ great opener nice flow and def feelin the wordplay but the subjugate ya' subjects just eh wasnt feeling that part nice personal 7/10
your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,
or mic grapplin, you ain't got shit on me....you a verson of Aaron Carter battlin
You can shrink the faunt all you want and your shit still looks like fucked lines
Called me out , well the first 2 battles you ducked missed ya own check time
Stop Stunting...Dumb Prick...Wit One Cent ..Worth of Rap Flow?
Ask Who's Better Between Me And You?...I Get Picked Like a Afro
^^once again nice wordplay but tactics and battlin dont rhyme too good so it kinda made me not feel it as much umm personal wasnt that great but credit for it being in there 6/10
I slay emcees for the hell of it, and the death of you, is my next agenda
its a good thing this is only one round/ I don't wanna be a repeat sex offender
My Tactics Flip You Backwards Until Your Stutterin From Loss~Of~Words...
Being Alergic To Oregano And Eatin Pizza Was The Last Time I Lost~To~Herbs...
^^aight it was okay wasnt feling it all that much too much self glorifying to me but nice flow and there wasnt really any direct punches 5/10
Think you hot it took fluidmoons chorus to help you make a name , consider that a gift
From what i've read your bull shit and wack, Ya Skills like ya name, Just a fucking Myth...
^^okay awesome closer i liked the personals a lot and but punches werent that hard hitting but personals made it nice 8/10
overall 26/40

nice battle was close but myth had more personals
pick had the wordplay

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