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Old 10-15-04, 01:05 AM   #12
streetryda
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Voted For: Myth

aight tight battle guys i liked the overall flow and volcab of both verses nice wordplay and structure...punches were nice and i like the personals

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wildfire
okay nice verse i was def feeling hte flow and wordplay nice volcab too...
good punches and personals
but you did a lot of self glorifying in the middle to the end of your verse i hate to see that a lil is alright but that was too much..it killed your drop even tho it was nice it just made me feel it less.work on that man..also some shit didnt make too much sense to me..but oyu had some nice multi's

best line
we both die only because i slice my jugular with my tongue, a razor bladed weapon..
battlin me? you steppin up to die, but this ain't the stairway to heaven..
I murder ho's, so at the end of this battle, forensics will study your mangled position..
I strangle tradition, your wins stay the same cause i mangle addition..

myth
aight nice verse man i was feeling it all throughout and great personals...nice punches and flow was tight.....you stayed on topic pretty much...and i didnt see much selfglorifyin which is a plus cuz some is alright...liked the volcab and creativeness in the drop..nice

best lines
i'll throw a zippo lighter into the bushes to start a brush fire
kid swear he "On Fire" like "lloyd banks" but i'm bout to crush tyra
wildfire couldn't elevate even if he tagged along with mountain climbers
kid's really femine inside, occupation? he'll become a gay fashion designer
u say u leave resin from smokin herbs, but u soft like wind to kites *
this boys a fag he done blown on more dicks then smokers with newport lights
all signs point to dope, lmao, boy u sweeter then caffine from coke or pepsi
this mans a fag, he pmed me the other day saying that he thought i was sexy
sick closer man nice

v/myth
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