hmm....interesting piece for sure...had some real depth to it....even though it would be more suited to Open Mic maybe....it was still a nice piece...

...good word play....flowed with a certain 'zig zag' like style to it....(which is good)...i would say a good introduction to the poetic scriptures...(!?!?!)....keep them coming...would like to see more poetic styled pieces though...but its all good....

...respect....