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Old 10-15-04, 08:32 AM   #13
BkBrawla
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Voted For: JRad

Look at his name it's Razor, why? He likes to shave his legs
Run 'em over with my Blazer, Die, You now look like scrambled eggs
I'll scrap you off the sidewalk, and feed you to your dad
He'll probably die from shock, but the rest of us will be glad
Your girl will be sort of mad, your family will be left sad
They've been shown whos bad, don't fuck with the JRad


^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD 'OK" PUNCHES GOOD FLOW NICE STRUTURE AND WORD-CHOOSIN


yo im gonna span ur bck n punche u in da nose//
hit u with my ryhmes so ard u fall 2 tha ground i give u a over dose//
yo rhymes r wack just lyk ur face u walk lyk a gay bo at pace//
u cant rap so y u here man ur a discrase to the rap race//
i lyk to win witch im gonna doi punch ur in da face until u die//
u cant rap u no ur bitin i will kill u slowly until u fry//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" PUNCHES NICE FLOW

V-JRAD CAUSE HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES AND FLOW HE EDGED IT

RAZOR-"OK" VERSE BUT IT WASNT GOOD ENOUGH U DIDNT HAD NO GOOD PUNCHES U HAD FLOW I GIVE U PROPS FOR THAT BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT

JRAD- GOOD VERSE BUT IT WAS TOO LIL BASIC USE CREATIVE PUNCHES NEXT TIME DEN U'LL BE BETTA ELEVATE USIN PERSONALS AIGHT

~PEACE~
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