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Voted For: *Troop*
both of you actually did good.. im suprised at emp for actually posts a below average verse.....
EMp: ya shit was iight.. nothing special...... nice overall but you had some flaws.. ya structre was noty that good which i thought you needed to improve very mucvh on...but ya flow was iight but at some partds ya flow didnt go to good.. ya personals were a bit better than i usually expect from you..... actually a lil harder.. ya punches did very good... decently strong..... didnt feel the closer very much though.. but the middle was iight..... good job.. im shocked.. LOL
Troop: ya shit was very good nice overall... nice lines...... but i though that ya structre was messed up like a mofo and its streched up so much too.... so emp got you with the flow and stucutre.. which he normally doesnt ghet... but troop came in with way harder punches that was good.. peronals ehh.. i wasnt feelin those shit much.. but it was iight...
both of yuo gotta stop using explinaation cos i deduct points from that..
Vote troop.. for a slighly better verse
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