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Old 10-15-04, 02:45 PM   #13
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From: Bmore, Murderland
This was feedback posted for *Troop*

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damn...if i COULD vote i would give this to Troop...Empire yes u may say that im d/rin cuz he in my crew...no...if u check his battles i have voted against him...

Troop i liked ya punches they hit harder in this one...ya opener was stretched...so u can work on that...ya wordplay was good too..punches were origional as well...

Empire..i didnt understand ya opener...i see where it was goin but you shoulda worded it betta..it woulda hit harder..i really didnt understand ya punches...so u need to work on ya wordplay and how u word ya punchs...cuz the p.c. line......closer was a personal...but u coula made that a personal and a punch too..

so if i could vote i would give it to Troop...but A.I stand up
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