Voted For: Still_Remain

umm this was ok i guess...Brawla get rid of all the
"*/-*!" stuff cause it makes your verse look bad
and less enjoyable to read and harder as well..
you lacked creativity and emotion..Remain wins
because i felt that his was better and more complex
came with more creativity and emotion which u barely
had...practice a bit more and take some more time to think
of what your writting about and as well try to shorten your lines
dont stretch them out to much and those spaces in between
every line or 2 is pointless...elevate some more then try again
nice attempt though i give you props for that.

V/ Still_Remain