Johnny 6

first off, battling me is dead wrong like chris wallace and eminem/
i'll block your punches like martial artists, you defenseless like armless men/
Eh.. kind of a weak starter.. and playd badly
you tryin'a mix PHD with PMS and be a smart bitch/
i'm heart-less, putting concrete in your rhymes couldnt make a hard-diss/
decent...
you backward like criss-cross clothes, like pamela a, a silly ho/
bet your real skills only stack up in the art of blow/
ok build up... But you tryd to force it to much.. ruind the punch
you little bow-wow, get stepped on like ants/
i post battle verses, you just post rants/
more of a filler
fuck a multi, or imagery or a well-written diss/
i'll take this battle shit back to basic and just beat you with sticks/
ok
you misguided like nellys collaberation with n-sync/
one line you drop got more holes than fences thats chain-link/
not bad
fuck it, your masocistic, i'll let you get you like pink/
got permanent writers block like air-blonde who cant think/
weak
you so etheral, you aint even got presense of mind/
retarded, need ghost-writers when dropping a text-rhyme/
Ghost writer part is byound playd

Over all ya verse was likea 5 or a 6..
Rhyme scheme needs alot of work, metaphors are ok for now.. best thing you have going but alot of playd ones..
Vocabs mediocre, mutlis eh..... Punchs need a lil more work.. Try for harder personals might help..

Tonya Montana

You could be a JEWEL THIEF and still could'nt drop GEMS ~~ You could'nt Grasp A W if you was a DYLEXIC making M&M's ~~
ok starter..A lil playd but good..(playd part is the M&M line, rest is chill
A rapoligist, this Battle I got this~~ You'll get Molested Verbaly faster than Girls who HMO pick R-KELLY as their GYNECOLOGIST~~ I rip thru weak Mcees and murder the average~~ My rhymes Kills you quicker than a 1st MONTH MISCARRIAGE~~
good bars.. nice punch in um, but there to long, shorten your bars some and reword it..
Bury Johnny 6ft Deep so let the Casket FALL~~ Cause you entered this battle knowing you did'nt HAVE THE BALLS LIKE LESBIAN SHOWER STALLS ~~
ok line.. not that hard tho
Your rhymes
TRASH like CRUSH CANS ~~ you're PUNCHES are like CIGARETTES TIPS on the EARTH SUFACE they do everything BUT{t} LAND ~~
good line
I kick rappers like you in tha azz till ya RECTUM DESTROYED ~~ AND THE TONGUE on my Reeboks TASTE YA HEMROIDS ~~ You could'nt spit HOT with a Mouth Full of HELIUM~~ Labeling you with the STYLE of a MIME cause nobody's FEELIN EM~~
very last lines a lil playd... Rest isnt bad, just doesnt flow that well

Over all ya verse would be like a 7.3/7.5 metaphors are good.. Nice punchs, but your flow kills ya verse.. Its WAY off, an needs help.. Vocab aint bad, multis coulda been better..

Vote= Tonya Montana

over all she came harder with Punchs