you dog no ones hating on you at all.. Fuckign look at your verse, honestly... then red Silents... which is better???

Sure as hell wasnt yours... You lackd GOOD PUNCHS, FLOW,VOCAB,METAPHORS and MULTIS... all of the basic elements to a good verse.. you need alot of work..

SilentKaos didnt have that hard of a verse, but her flow n multis workd your verse.. and she had weak punchs, but still harder than yours... Take some time and look around at other peoples verses.. Check out LLBL, peep ish like Chickens verse, thats an "ill" verse..

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o ya.. i dotn feel like doing a break down or quote.. so blah