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IllRhymePhonetic dares to step up...with no flow,
His records aight...considering all his wins are no-shows//
He asked for this battle and its here...Now IRP's hopin,
that I'll drop my pants...even his avatars mouth is wide open//
damn your flow is byound off.. work on it.. Opener wasnt bad, follow through suckd
Syntax posted about siggy length, yours is 40, rhyme...
your about as gay as those 7 dots at the end of your lines//
this dyke wants a belt so bad hes suckin off the sites host,
he thought he wasnt a newbie...Just cuz he has 150 posts//
first part COULDA been good, but it fell off..more like a filler
think you can win with wordplay about crap and shit..?
I wanna battle you alone, dont bring yah dictionary into this//
I drop this one-time, dickriders wonder...yah won-rhyme?//
how can I take him seriously...when he has a crewmate named sun-shine//
end wasnt bad.. Had iight punch to it, nothing special, personal punch was iight...Dictionary part wasnt bad either

Over all like a 6 for a verse.. Lackd on W/p and hard punchs.. Multis were weak, an vocab was ok.. Metaphors were lacking big time i thought..


i shatter ur rhymes and cover em with dirt and grime..............
i could spit my hole verse with dots and still wreck yo rhyme...
ok line
u were crazy steppin ta me and claimin that im a rook...........
u can call me barry sanders cus u jus got shook....................
weak
kid ya rhymes is took...............prolly bitten like yo style..............tha only thing ur winnin is under biography in ur fuckin profile http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/mem...nfo&userid=3039 .....
its ok
.......im tired of these fakes ................. ur rhymes r "off center" like fruitcakes.....not straight...............crooked faggot.........u aint really tryin ta bag shit.....................tha only "experience" u got is from yo"long service" suckin on my prick.*points at sig*
ok punch.. other than that kinda weak..

lieka 6.9 for a verse.. You had one or two lines that werent bad, but ya metaphors were down, same with hard punchs an dope mulits... keep elevaten tho..

Vote= Rhyme Phonetic due to the fact he came betta, a slightly harder witha few bars..

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