This was a really dope piece, everything flowed damn near perfectly. The wordplay and multies were used amazingly. there was decent imagery for a piece that had no real topic but that made this piece better. i think the chorus could have been just a little bit better but for text it was a straight chorus. If it was an audio the chorus would need a little work. most definately it was a hott open mic, and i think so far its the best ive seen this month good shit keep em' coming.

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