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Voted For: Myth

this kid claims after we battle he's done, he don't want no more beef *
he's already lost, his flows rough like tides washing through sea reefs

not a bad opener...7/10

souls choked up, here's a tissue, he seems to be copping feelings
fag? this kid lets men spread his legs apart like bananna peelings

good punch slash meta...8/10

now that's sickness, ain't no defending that, eww..that's some nasty shit
featured with prince in the background dancing, purple rain was his last hit

this was funny as fuck...9/10

i could take this boy to a hardwood court and he still wouldn't be classic
punches have u bleeding from the nose, dumb? u ain't on the rag dick

not feelin the first line...but the 2nd carried it...7/10

u probably use to winning by no show's, proof is in the stats man *
but u ain't gotta be a cherry for my bars to consume u like pac-man

decent punch/meta....7/10

faggot all ya useless bickering and nagging is getting to me, i'm annoyed
why u claiming ya hard but ya rhymes come plastic like mcdonald's toys

not the best...but it made me laugh..so 8/10

how u gonna talk shit, 2 wins away from matching ya wins and losses, damn son *
homosexual tendencies? u a fag go dye ya hair blonde like sisqo and then join hanson

good punch....but your really sayin the same thing over a few times..about him bein gay...it was creative though...so 7/10

welfare or poor? kidnap ya, but ya ain't shit, ya family sends coins as ransom *

pretty good personal...8/10

summary: your verse was decent, not the best i've seen from you...but over all..pretty good...and i enjoyed some parts....over all score = 61/80...average per bar= 7.6

u talentless kid simply said ya skills are a MYTH/
he only use mouth to tighten his lips and consume dick/

okay personal...kind of played cause i'm sure everyones used it...and i wasn't feelin the 2nd line...6/10

u tlk madd shyt and say ive been forever duckin shyt/
but like DMX said u really dunno who u fukin wit/

you said shyt twice in the same line...thats a bad move..also...if dmx said it..or anyone else for that matter..that means..you shouldn't say it...4/10

throw punches and grill ya ass like i was george forman/
ya whole shyt built on lies like u the founder of mormans/

george forman line is played as fuck..and the 2nd line is an oppinion.not a fact...so 4/10

whole structure simple in lines and design/
cant have greatness so u tryin steal a piece of my mind/

umm...not a good self hype line..or a diss...who disses structure?...3/10

jus to advanced to inhanced while u keep ya shyt simplistic/
u aint half the man u got guns i drop boms like balistics/

this was actually good..by far the best line you had....i give it a 8/10

summary: your shit was pretty herbish and basic...you need madd elevation, potential is there obviously, cause i saw a decent line or TWO..the rest was weak...your overall score is....25/50 average score per bar: 5

this battle was not close...look at the bar comparisons....

5 and 7.6 my vote goes to myth...and fuck you if you think this is inadequate feedback....bitches...