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Old 10-15-04, 08:20 PM   #8
BkBrawla
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Voted For: streetryda

yo ill turn ya tee rose red/and like a stuckup up bitch ill leave wit no head/fuck wit me go head/no harm done/leave ya corpse decayin from my gun/and that lead to me layin in malibu/soakin up sun/before u thought u was gunna be pokin fun/at the illest mc/the realest next to run dmc/itll be suntin when me clips empty/now u aint frontin wit ya dome split cause u wanted to tempt me/i guess u a street ryda/but u started beef/and im ya meat supplya/put u in the ocean wit the charters and coral reef/have u in disbelief/cause my punchlines hit u so hard itll leave u wit no teeth/wit a heart cold like the deceased/and id go for for ya chain but its gold leaf/ the only grass u smokin on is under my feet/if it wasnt for instrumentals id use thunder as abeat/ so just except for defeat
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ UM THA STRUTURE IS MESSED I CANT HARDLY READ IT.........BUT DA FLOW IS MESSED UP,,,,,,,,, IF U CORRECT DA STRUTURE A LIL BIT MAYBE U'LL GET DA WIN I C ALOT OF PUNCHES BUT DA FLOW IT JUST MESSED UP MAYNE


dflow's mind is real slow, he cant keep up the pace
trace a line around your figure cuz you fell out this race
police cant understand how u just suddenly dropped
i worked you from the start causing your heart to stop
scared your face, embrace my lyrics, spirits blessed my mind
more unique than and uncommon than 4 leaf clovers to find
dont boast that u tuck heat, only hide your hand playin with ya meat
increased the count of the deceased found u on the obituary
mayb you'll find your way if you went on an itinerary
internal organs briused, abused and left a mangled body
choosed the wrong answer, loosed your life ouside the lobby
hobbies will get you dead, shot, or behind steel bars
sneak up steal ya life, diseased you like i spit real sars
dissed your body in the river but you wont be missed
pissed off the wrong person, so i deliver slits on your wrists
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT MAYNE NICE VERSE HERE U HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW GOING NICE STRUTURE

V-STREETRYDA CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW

DFLOW-WHY U CALL YOSELF DAT WHEN U CANT EVEN FLOW~! LOL *AHEM* ANYWAY U HAD NO FLOW NO GOOD STRUTURE DA FLOW JUST MESS YOU UP IN DIS BATTLE I SAW ALOT OF PUNCHES ONLY U HAD FLOW U COULD GOTTIN AN VOTE OR GOTTIN AN WIN BUT DA FLOW IS MESSED UP DATS DA WHOLE ASPECT OF FREESTYLE DA *FLOW*

V-STREET CAUSE OF HARDER FLOW GOOD PUNCHES

~PEACE~
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