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IP:
Voted For: One-Man-Band
this was a dope battled, much effort respected on both sides.
string: ya had some really great lines, a good opner and some hot wordplay. ya mutlis were good in the beginning of the verse, that basically set the pace for a good structured verse, in all aspects your verse was hot, i love the lines about the sealy matress, and the puffy's cousin ones. those were dope, your two best lines in the battle most definately. but ya closure was not as dope, i wasnt feeling it as much as the rest of ya punches.
one man band: wow, that was so funny, ya had me laughing. well ya had good structure as well, ya verse wasnt at all wack, ya opener though was decent but not horrible, just could have been better, you had some great punches too, like the line about couldnt tie if ya said the fron ot ya name, nice thinking, and the ctrl alt delelte one was good, the better ones were filled with wordplay like the bloddstream one, that was good, but my favorite was also your closure, the one about ya whole verse was a filler, hot stuff. i would agree with myself that you had better punches and gave more threat.
vote: one man band.
id ask you to return the favor but my only battle, my opponent hasnt dropped yet, so when he does...check me out. pz.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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