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Old 10-16-04, 12:36 AM   #10
Sik Wit It
 
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From: Florida
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Voted For: x-on

Bradley_Thomas’s Verse
this is my shit right here//
singin songs and drinkin bear//
woopin ur ass//
top of my class//
gratuated as a criminal//
ur alive till i come//
woop ur ass ur strung//
rip out ur tounge//
isnt tis fun//
tie u down, ur bakin in the sun//
ur diein slow liek u r suppose to//
ur turned around and in ur ass is my shoe//
make u eat tofu//
taste like shit//i wipe u like the dog u r//
woopin ur ass in the bar//
leave u wit no legs and some scars//
i got ot go now so long for now//
as always i take my bow//
4/10
ur verse wasn’t any~good…kinda suck’d…
fix yo structure…work on ya flow…and ur
punches need to be harder…

X-On’s Verse
-ON fails to comprhend why he wants to battle with a record of "0-2"?
Parimative player?, dog you a "child" what's your name Braddley who//?
5/10
Thomas? blain, no originality that's why I'm a hate to add an other loss/
Cause to rap your the minimum wage worker and i'm the overpaid boss//
6/10
There hope for this cat ever here of "GOD LOVES UGLY" from slug?/
Cause I know your a nasty fag from your interest you no thug//
6/10
Fuck being optimist, I'm a bring every negative characteritic and put them in fright/
Do yourself and every member a favor and log of this dam fucking site//
7/10
And look at yourself, little stewy as your pic wow what a dam baby~/
So i'm a take this battle as if it was a fucking giant bar of "candy~//
6/10
u practically killed Bradley_thomas mayn…any
u had a pretty decent punches…and a nice flow
elevate more tho…
…Peace
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