Voted For: Notorious Verses

Notorious took this easily, Unknown you had self-glorification in your opener - not a good start. Your punches were weak, and your wording was just too simple. But I can understand you're new here so just practice and you'll get better. Notorious, you had some ok punches in your verse, nothing too special though. You had a good opener, but it was dragged down by the length of your lines. That's really the biggest piece of advice I can give you - shorten your lines down. If they're stretched it throws your whole verse off, and even though you had some good wordplay at times, gotta fix your structure. No hate, keep doin' y'all thing...
V//Notorious Verses

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