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Old 10-16-04, 03:57 PM   #6
Parallel
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yte grl:
k nice verse needs work but who dosent needs work...but nice punches attepts at the begaining but towords the end you came fuckin hard had the punches on lock you were sayin shit abotu diffrent crews n shit its was hella tight...try using vocab it makes people think what the word means its what i do..

DopeMan:
um that was hella weak lol stuctue was way off...but it flowed not realy hard punches but need to act with vocab but nether did yte girl...she came way harder man you need some stucture to win a battle lol...maybe vocab to but thats not jsut me lol...good try

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