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Old 10-16-04, 04:39 PM   #40
streetryda
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Voted For: oreo

okay oreo got my vote his verse was better flowin and had harder punches...good wordplay and good personals i liked it and you had better structure but your only flaw was the one stretched line but nice youv def gotten better
8/10 on the whole

surgical okay you had good flow but i wasnt really feling your shit too much structure was messed up lines were short then stretched try to even them out some...punches were good but oyu self glorified a lot so that hurt you..also your x-ray line didnt rhyme with anything so that hurt you a lil....didnt see any personals if you woulda thew some in it woulda been closer.but like i said structure man work on it

fav lines
oreo-your like 12 with out a win and surgery is your hoobby?
well put an iv in your skin, cuz that will be the only flow in your body,

surgical-Cant beat me you not strong enough so keep eatin your whetes
Head spinnin like CDs when I pop up in your hood more than graffiti

v/oreo
return the favor honest explained votes plz.
peace~1
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