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Old 10-16-04, 05:36 PM   #13
Abraxas
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Voted For: Tricky Wretch

Both of you was good.. but some were kinda wack
(th: ok you had an iight verse but not that good.. you had some flaw... definatly you didnt have good flow.. duno why hope said it was good.....ya structre was iight... you had good punches there were iight... though ya personals wasnt much of a threat there...some of your lnies were forced like the 3rd line... and some didnt connect.... and the last bar didnt rhyme.. wordplay was iight though

Tricky Wrench: first ya shit was good... one sided battles kind of... you had good flow which was better... also ya personals were not as good but it was iight.. nice strucutre... punches were funny and good.....yours was much stronger that 9ths verse and it was overall better.......

Vote is wrench for a better verse and more original with better punches and flow...
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