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this was good.. ..
"Obsessive, Compulsive, hell nah just the strive to,
succeed -
Aiming high not finshing till the end dont care if it,
takes me a lil longer or if i bleed -"
nice opener, came out with a good tone.. ..
"Maken sure i give it my best so no critics fuck about,
so no lies are created no unjustifiable doubt -"
but after this part the flow got off track a lil.. ..although its hard to judge flow threw text because everyone has their own.. ..in my opinion it trailed off a lil from there
"Theres no time to figure a pattern or have a plan,
before you know it your out and im waving ma hands -
Murderous by nature Masked in my fame ,
represting this crew but dont forget the name -
DiMeOnd"
when you got here, the flow picked back up and (lyrically as well) stayed on point all tha way to tha end.. ..my favorite part as well, keep doin ya thang ma
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