Voted For: I. Mind

vote:I Mind


L.I.

your strucure was ok
but not apropriate for topiacls
the vocab was good but it ruined your flow
for da 1st couplealines

but the feeling in it was sick

I liked how it got better throughout
the story...but the one thing that ruined
is the structure...still sick though

I.Mind

you went perfect on this...

structure was topical like...

the stroyloike them to it
gave it a talib kweli like aura
the vocab made it seem more
lik a veteran in rap wrote it...

really feelin this...

good battle

vote/I.Mind

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