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Old 10-17-04, 12:14 AM   #16
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Voted For: Soulless

Soulless

We ain‘t playing put-put….and still B comes with miniature-hits
His text is flat….and…. hard to read… just like his signature-is!!!!
very nice in the setup but the punch is blah...it was obvious you wanted to make the signature punch and you kinda stretched too much to make that comparison...
Im ‘pinning-the-kid‘,… the Best Around...shit I’ll ‘leave-him-torn‘…
And make RV see the ‘end of him‘.. Like he mooned-the-boards!!!!
nah...this is weak...
You should really show ya record….you must have ‘something-to-mention‘…
Cuz we can all see… that even your name… is ‘just-an-expression’!!!!*
meaningless multis...
..ya Lyrics are ‘far from the best‘, the kids telling ‘lies like rapid‘….
U drop so damn quick…. My verse is forced to be… ‘Below average‘!!!!
lies like rapid is a forced multi...the punch was a little played but it was enjoyable once i got it...made me chuckle...

your verse wasnt that good but it was alright...you had attempted punches and one or two good ones and your verse was put together better...enough for the vote here...


B.L.A.
300 somethin post.. still your soul couldn't summon to Pro
you aren't even in my stats in fact... you are under my sole
blah...
if you lack soul why are you rapping,you happen to know...
that if you battlin a wack rapper..that the mirror havoc will show*
i didnt understand your punch even with the explanation
you quote kweli,but battling me aint a beautiful struggle*
you couldn't plan a play to win anyway even while in a huddle
couldve been ill with the setup but then it just fell off...
you have eugoly...you aint fooling me,even a fool would see*
you ae never the brightest,your mind speaks of silence*
just randomly changed your rhyme scheme here and it wasnt really saying anything it was just rhyming words...
you couldn't soak talent in a MOVING BEACH,*just retire
because if your soulless,then you won't rap not even in quior
blah...

your verse wasnt too good here...it felt like you were reaching for punches but nothing was really connecting...some of it was just meaningless rhyming...you need to work on making harder hitting punches that dont need explanation...
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