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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
iight...
verbal: this wasn't ur best but i could see as u sed u just keyed it in...
score:
punch: 8/10..pretty good.. especially representin the fems! lol
fow:9/10 good flow..it flowed good da whole time
structure: 9/10..very good structure.. easy to understand
personal:7/10good personals..but not very strong
total: 33/40 (pretty good)
myth: i really don't like how u put ur verse..it was pretty stretched..the only way u made it not look stretched was wen u made the words smaller.. so don't stretch em agen plz!
score:
punch: 7/10..okay punches..though not as strong!
flow: 6/10 didn't flow good at all!(work on it)
personals: 6/10..iight, these personals wern't good.. plz don't use links..they jst pretty old..n not good..
strucutre...3/10.. blah.. sucky structure..
22/40...(F! lol.. do better next time)
vote: Verbal Abuse..
-Mind
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