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Old 10-17-04, 01:03 AM   #15
HoPe
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

iight...

verbal: this wasn't ur best but i could see as u sed u just keyed it in...

score:
punch: 8/10..pretty good.. especially representin the fems! lol
fow:9/10 good flow..it flowed good da whole time
structure: 9/10..very good structure.. easy to understand
personal:7/10good personals..but not very strong

total: 33/40 (pretty good)

myth: i really don't like how u put ur verse..it was pretty stretched..the only way u made it not look stretched was wen u made the words smaller.. so don't stretch em agen plz!

score:
punch: 7/10..okay punches..though not as strong!
flow: 6/10 didn't flow good at all!(work on it)
personals: 6/10..iight, these personals wern't good.. plz don't use links..they jst pretty old..n not good..
strucutre...3/10.. blah.. sucky structure..

22/40...(F! lol.. do better next time)

vote: Verbal Abuse..

-Mind
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