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Old 10-17-04, 01:10 AM   #2
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Voted For: mic-wrecker

ok flow good but you need better vocab and a better imagery see how mic said you have a couple hail marys you better sing and you said seek out drug dealers to employ me?big image diffrence there he had a more complex deep image while yours was straight up which is cool but not good in a topical to win mic had better vocab structure and gave a better image and in topicals that wins so he gets my vote for showing me a verbal picture better
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Originally Posted by Lyriclesolja

oh and by the way dont ask to battle everyone on here knows thats your only defence..

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?