Voted For: Daz

shadow
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but most of it was played and/or wack.. none of ur punches connected.. that dazaster line is played, as is jackoson, as is mom jokes, and that one about deleting veres is just wack.. attempted personal, but came out wack and played..

Daz
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty dope.. ive seen some of the concepts before, but some were good.. most of ur punches connected.. the only one i didnt really like was the last one.. u attempted a personal in ur last bar, but i didnt like it that much..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. both attempted one personal.. neither had multis.. Daz had better wordplay as well as more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Daz gets my vote..

VOTE - DAZ