Voted For: B.I.Detained

Socrates
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. and minus points for rhyming with and with in ur last bar.. i only liked the wordplay in ur first bar, the rest wasnt to good.. more of ur punches would have connected if u would have set them up right.. the set up u used for ur punches took away from their effect.. attempted personal.. it was decent..

B.I.Detained
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. dope wordplay.. that line about Socrates bein a great battler in his time pretty much did it for me.. most of ur punches connected, though as i previously stated, the one about Socrates was ur best.. and once again, seein as the Socrates line was a personal, that was dope..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. B.I.Detained had better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. B.I.Detained gets my vote..

VOTE - B.I.DETAINED