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Old 10-17-04, 01:41 AM   #14
Magic5
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Voted For: Dopeman

Wrecker
structure is good.. flow fell of a little throughout ur verse.. no multis.. u attempted a lot of wordplay, but some of it was either played, or just didnt make since.. like the Dunn line.. i dont get what that had to do with anything.. it was just, there.. whatever though.. nnone of ur punches connected.. seriously.. u attempted a personal, but it didnt connect..

Dopeman
structure is pretty good.. flow is good for the most part.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was pretty good at some parts.. like the big pun line.. a few of ur punches connected.. pretty much the only 2 i liked was the big pun one, and the light weight one.. the rest i wasnt feelin.. the light weight line was a decent personal..

Overall
both had a good structure.. Dopeman had the better flow.. more multis.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and a better personal.. so basing off of that.. Dopeman gets my vote..

VOTE - DOPEMAN