master blaster'll plastered wit bio-hazard/
no wut i mean, u saltine, watch u burn u fuckin craka/
Kind of a Weak Start Out..
dont let the n-word be heard comin out yo mouth again/(check out his thread in members pics)
run up in yo house, guns out, and im blastin them/
Big Filler
cant believe i wus deceved by yo whack raps and thought u wus black/
checked yo pick and my mind switched, bitch u should be slaped/
eh This Iight, Not that HArd of a Punch Tho
ur pigment impared, wit straight hair, but clame yo moms a soul sista/
jus cus i hit dat dont change the fact that u aint black, damn i miss her/
Weak
this aint beef, ull be deceased if ur seen droppin the n-bomb/
thatd be like me given the other white meat(pork)to a black muslim/
Weak.. But if Reworded could be ill

Over all this verse would be like a 5.8.. You need work on alot of your basic.. Wordplay,personal punchs,ect...



Masterblaster

My name don't start with a P
But I still got lots of styles for miles
Kick you in the stomach
Make you spit up 3 meals and gut bile
Stomach acid
To broke for a funeral
So I slit your wrist in a casket
To broke for a casket
So I set your body on fire
In a tin is where I put the ashes
Only thing left of dime_hole
Was peach pubic hairs and his pretty long eye lashes
Your lyrics aint even really killin' me
Make you drink a bowl of radioactivey
So do me a favor
Go home and piss cancer
Cause you aint even really ready for Master Mans light saber
We played dress up
He was the screaming dumb blonde
While I was the raper
Eh.. The style of it was iight.. Over all like a 6 for a verse.. RHyme scheme was kinda new type ish.. But it was iight, your punchs werent comen the harderst, but it was on target.. Metaphors in there were ok, but you should try uppin on more...



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