aiight...well ill give you some actual constructive advice...
the concept of this is great, the battle scene in the back however needs to be taken out of focus some more, perhaps a blur or a color change. Even darken it, something so the backround doesnt stick out so much.
Also the backround is too stretched, dont stretch backrounds to match your sig size, you could of resized the sig to make it "fit" better, not just stretch it by the x axis.
the text is pretty hot
other than that...good job for ya first few peices of work, keep elevating .6s.