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Old 10-17-04, 12:06 PM   #2
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From: Trenton 609|look me up bitch
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Voted For: sabotage

yo man no doubt you won:
but first let me say what was wrong with frein-master did wrong:
first and most important:
your style was horribale i think you might have done everything wrong wit it first the //'s stop that second the bold letter, we no what the good lines are when we read it so no need for it third ____________ same thing as the bold letters.
ok second:
your flow sometimes it was short lines and then therew were long one and stop with the () i have no idea why you usew them
now thrid:
lyrics were pretty bad. i think it because your style and flow was bad. There was some good lines but alot just seemed played out
one think you did good was mults you had mad mults but that does win battles

ok sabotage:
first i don't like the new name
but everything else looked good
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