now im not normally a violent person, unless u give me a reaspn/
but if u pop shit about me, ill shoot u, even if bitch aint in season/
alright
so just cause im a woman dont mean i cant b violent/
in such a sick world, multiple gunshots wont even make media silent/
nice wordplay
its like murder is a game, like a sport or a hobby/
hundreds of ppl git killed everyday, but my song aint about 2 git sobby/
i aint tryin 2 preach, i got 2 much of a backround/
but in my case, if rappin effects were like wrestlin, my lyrics a smackdown/
alright...kinda basic
ive been thru tough times, haters hatin my shit/
drugs, sex, and violence, emotional relationships/
nice flow..i like the emotion behind it
bitch u know im talkin bout u, so dont fuckin deny it/
my records out n exposed, so u cant just hide my shit/
basic..
u raped me bitch, made me pay 4 my own abortion 2/
but u aint gittin away with this im out 2 torture u/
alright
who woulda known id grow up 2 b such a lyrical genius/
date such a fag, slice off both balls from his penis/
ewwww
dangle his dick right in front of his face (ha ha!)/
am i suckin hard enough now?! blast fuckin semen all over the place/
no comment...lol
cmon, bitch, wanna take advatnage of me now? grab my chest and use me 4 sex/
well i guess i aint got a choice, im 2 high 2 fight back, i knew i shoulda refused that X/
basic..
cause i hate u, y the fuck did i date u?/
i should rape u, all iwanted was a thank u/
nooo this was bad.
i did so much shit for u, u never took the time for a glance/
that bitch swingin her thong up in ur face, the hos got u in trance/
alright
do i not mean shit 2 u? i thought that we were sumthin?/
but im stuck another night at home, naked, watchin ur body humpin/
decent
im sick of bein white trash, its time 2 make a come back/
u gonna git ur nuts cracked, im more than just a big rack, boy ima make ur guts clap/
??
squirtin outta ur mouth, unless u watch the shit u speakin/
im cut all ur limbs off, we aint even close 2 the weekend/
wow ur bad
so watch wut u say, else ur out 4 a bitch smack/
think im playin around, but u better just watch yo back!!!
kkkkkkkk .basic shit

overall-6.5/10

it was mostly all basic with no multies and a lil creativity here and there......i see ur potential....juss keep writing.....u could of used multies and metaz to make it better....just some basic shit u wrote but....the emotional load was there.......

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