this was personally a weak battle, the only good one was poetics...

L.E., i thought you could do better? well maybe now cuz dis battle is like 1 month old lol.. umm,

Score:
flow: 9/10, anyone can have a good flow really.
imagery:6/10 you really didn't have as much as good imagery, thats something you should really work on..
structure:9/10, anyone can have good structure.lol
emotion: 6/10, i really didn't feel any emotion in your verse, try putting more next time.
Vocab: 6/10now you must work on your vocab, you had alrite words, but just do better next time...
Total: 36/50

Poetic: damn man, alot of props to you, i've never seen your shyt before, but this was pretty damn good... And you used smeagal??haha, nyce move, i would of used that big guy sarran or w/e his name is lol, pretend im watching the ring the whole time ..but yea, damn ur shyt was good...

score:
Flow: 9/10 it flowed very nice man, good job..
Imgery: 8/10 Very nice imagery, haha, i could still see that moment in the movie theather as if i was there..
structure: 9/10 very nice structure..but neoen could have good structure>
Emotion: 6/10 It had okay emotion..not really alot.. but ur imagery made it like it didn't matter.
Vocab: 7/10, it had okay vocab..but still came up acoule times..so yea..pretty good..
Total: 39/50

vote: poetic

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