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Old 10-17-04, 07:07 PM   #30
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ok limited dope shit good flow and vocab but the imagery got you this dope story straight on topic here told the story how its suppose to be told and had it so i could see what you were talking about.
poetic good also nice vocab as well both had good structure but you failed to provide the image limited did and that made your topical not as good.
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Originally Posted by Lyriclesolja

oh and by the way dont ask to battle everyone on here knows thats your only defence..

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?