allright...

i liked your flow and ability to stay on topic, the verse was nice.
You got a decent vocab. too. Nice Nice Nice

But...

You should try to add more complexity to your flow, like some punches, or multi's or internal rhyme. The more stuff you do with the verse, the more it's gonna shine. It's like a girl with a pretty face, sure she's iight, but wouldn't it be nice if she had some titties and a bangin ass too? ya kno, spice it up!!!

BlanKo