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Old 10-17-04, 09:01 PM   #48
Dabatos
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This was feedback posted for InFiniTe-LyriCs

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this was a okay battle....not one of the best..

King Solo: Your verse was pretty good man, you had a very nice opener, and a pretty good personal. Your flow flowed pretty well through out the verse, you punches hit pretty hard, your strucure needs a little workin on, and your vocab was good..

Delorean: your verse was way too basic, your opener wasn't good at all, because i believe people have used a punchline like that against them already, your flow flow pretty good through out the verse, your punches wasn't really hard, you punch was basiclly as hard as solo's weakest punch, your strucutre needs improvement as well, and your vocab was too much elementary, use a dictionary next time lol...

overall, i've seen both of you do alot better then this, you guys are good, this just happend not to be ur best ones!!! everything was almost the same except king solo had alot better punches and vocab..

vote: king solo!

oh shyt, i can't vote...damn 400 posts lol... w/e..i'll get 400 posts n change this later..
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