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Old 07-20-02, 03:28 PM   #16
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BREAKDOWN::

IP:

TRAVEZTY


TRAVIS is too large to handle- call him the microphone vandal//
i rip Stallone and step into the jungle to kill Rambo//

NICE OPENING HERE,I WAS FEELING IT,I THOUGHT THE SETUP COULD OF BEEN BETTER THOUGH.


your styles so phony DIREKT and im the fuckin copyright//
i get more wild than dedicated fans on hockey nights or during a Rocky fight//

NOT REALLY FEELING THIS,PRETTY MUCH FILLER,SETUP DIDNT GO WITH THE PUNCH.


u cant touch me i got all sorts of sources to use to seal//
try to breakthru barriers, barracks, barracades and my verbalforce fields//

OK

im eat u like a 4 course meal from a beginner to a veteran/
i count on takin this thing in other words i plan to win//

OK


You tried to shoot TRAV but your gat was not enabled//
And now ima leave DIREKT THREATS body mangled from his ankles to his facial//

FEELING THIS A LITTLE MORE THAN THE OTHER TWO COUPLETS,NOT BAD



The only toast you can relate to are slices-of-bread//
Learn a lesson from this niceness-instead fucker, if i see you bite-this-you're-dead//

WEAK SHIT,NOT HARD HITTING,NO EFFECTIVNESS


Homothuggin' mothafuckah, I flip yo ass, berserk-for-a-cause//
I seen ya last battle, son, you been workin'-ya-jaws//

WEAK AGAIN MAN,NOT FEELING IT


Youll never be ill in laimens terms You are a dreaming faker//
THREATS a bitch caught red handed like demonic finger painters//

BETTER,NOT BAD SHIT,NOT TOO HARD THOUGH


DIREKT U Like knocking over PO Boxes uve had so many male crushes//
and ya verses sucked and ya still more ConSeated then jail buses//

BEST SHIT IN YOUR VERSE THUS FAR,FEELING THIS


watch as your lines get pushed back as if you were losin ya hair//
this wac kat Couldnt have the crowd standin with an encore of musical chairs/

NOT A GOOD ENDING IN MY EYES,KINDA A WEAK ENDING NOT DOING FOR YA


DIRECT THREAT


Loving The Cocks', I'll Put A X On Your Dad's Head;
That's The Only Time You'll Be 'Rubbing The Spot'...!

LIKEING THIS OPENER,DECENT SETUP AND PUNCH COMBO


Won't Even Matter If He's Being 'Summond Or Not'...
He'll Only Be Seeing 'Glory' When It's The 'Comming Of God'...!

OK,NOT REALLY FEELING IT


I Inherit Tons; This Emcee 'Couldn't Serve Me For Lunch'...
Travezty Won't Be Killing Me; Still He Says: "I MURDER PEEPZ FOR FUN"...

NOT FEELING THIS


Travezty Won't Be Killing Me; Still He Says: "I MURDER PEEPZ FOR FUN"...
He's On The Homo Tip, This Website Know's 'Dicks Are For Tra-vez'...

BLAH



'Silly Rabbit', Battling Direkt Is Not A Game; 'Tricks Are For Kid's...!
All Your Lines Are Recycled; From Your First To 'Your Last'...

NOOOOOO



Verse's are Soft...Here's My Question, Where's This 'Fag's Aggression?
Trav Has To Snatch Out Pupils; That's The Only Way He 'Grabs Attention'...!

NOT BAD SHIT



He's rapping; 'Streets Are Hurt'...In That Case Im'a Have To 'Beat This Herb'...
'Cheeks are Curved'...Cut Your Verse And Make You 'Eat Your Words'...

OK,NOT REALLY FEELING THIS EITHER,BUT COO



Placing Beat's On HIm, You Got To Be 'Kidding Me Man'...
He Wheres Huggies; He See's Me And Starts 'Shitting His Pants...!

SORTA FUNNY,NOT BAD



It's Offical, He's Afraid Of Me; It's A Phobia Like To 'Fly On Planes'...
Here's A Rose Selena, Your Always Quick To 'Die On Stage'...

OK


Just Eat My Asshole So I Can Tell Everyone I 'Shit On T'...
I'll Rip Out Your Tonge...Now How You Gonna 'Spit With Me'?

LITTLE BASIC FOR AN ENDING,NOT COMING TOO HARD MAN,


UMM BOTH CAME EQUALLY DECENT,WHERE ONE EXCELLED OTHER FLAWED,THESE VERSES WERE OK,BUT I FELT DIRECT CAME WITH MORE PUNCHES THAT WERE HARDER,TRAVEZTY WAS OK ON PUNCHES NOTHING TO DIRECT.