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Old 10-17-04, 10:53 PM   #3
Spite
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this was meh, you gotta work on your flow, structure your bars better add multis to make it flow better, i dont really dig the gangsta flow unless there's some witty shit in it, like hard punches or some shit cause this was sounds good reading it. rating this a 2.8/5, keep dropping you need to elevate and this is the best way to, peace out!
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