Voted For: streetryda

disappointing battle


Streetryda: could have been better, structure was good except for one stretched line, flow was mainly on point, punches was hitting just enought to out measure dflow's, a few good meta's, not really any personals, u should add some cause they help, liked the mangled body line, opener was ok, closer was ok, expand ya vocab, ya had aight wordplay, ya verse seemed based on killing him somewhat, try basing the future ones on the opponets flaws and shit, basically talk about them, keep elevatin, 5/10


Dflow: did like ya verse at all, gun play is so played and way to much self-glorification, structure was fucked up, had some nice rhymes schemes, wasn't feeling "the realest next to run dmc" that line, ya verse also focused on talking about killing so much, gun talk is played, aim ya verse at the persons flaws, ok meta's, flow was off and on, punches wasn't really hitting, could have been alot better, elevate alot kid, 2/10


vote - Streetryda


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-NET RECORD-
17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S