Werdlife son. That was nice. Bomb ass flow, could use more multis if youre really using it for a song. Lyrics was pretty good from both but i feel that Paramik dropped much harder on the lyricism point. Chorus' should be where all the lines rhyme, for some reason it doesnt seem right if it doesnt. As in the intro and shit i dont think the words could go well in a song but for a music video yes. Just think bout what exactly youre doing before you do it. About the flow, it was good but stop trying to make the lines go straight down cuz thats not really what counts. The verses are supposed to be at least like 12 bars each, least thats how i see it so yall shoulda dropped more, i understand about feedback on rv tho. Good read, could use some work.....8/10

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