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Old 10-18-04, 02:22 AM   #33
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Spektiful
u had a nice vision and ok wordplay i mean it could have been better
u could have elevated a lil in this drop, i kinda felt where u were comin from but u need 2 work on your word selection a lil bit
ya structure was ok it looks better if u kept all the lines together

Va
i felt ya whole drop i felt where u were comin from
this wasent really close at all u had all the check points on point
had wordplay and i could see the vision that u were tryin 2 get across overall u had the better drop 4 better set ups and
a more clear verse 2 understand

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