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Voted For: DV8
Dv8
u had nice flawless structure i mean it was a lil long but datz aight
u can chop dat down u had nice punches and good setup
ya personals were portrayed really well and ya meta's were aight
u had some nice wordplay which stands out 2 me
Punches,Meta's and Personals and wordplay are the keyz 2 winning
and u checked them all
Ill
u came with an ok drop here u could of elevated it a lil
and provided a better structure cuz u lost points jus because
it was sloppy and kinda difficult 2 follow u should focus on a smaller font u can fit in alot more instead of havein the letters all big and stretched
ya punches were there but ya set up wasent and that also lost u points
nice personals
was kinda a close battle but Dv8 takes this one
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