Thread: These eyes
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Old 10-18-04, 07:50 AM   #9
Adamant
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nice work here, pretty good stuff
you had everything working for you mechanically speaking
flow, voacb, etc...content wise not bad either;i think you
could have benifitted from a bit more depth but none the
less it was still good and the point definitely came across
props man
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