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Old 10-18-04, 09:10 AM   #7
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Ahh fuck it...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Myth
come on all u gotta do is look at soc's sig and that's how we compare
pucker ya lips so u can kiss my ass like ya with friends doing a weekend dare
No....not feeling...2/10
oh i'm sorry did i offend u, no harm no foul, stop crying, go pluck ya eyebrows
i'll leave ya verse color coated like the wheel of fortune so u can buy a vowel
Rhymed good...but no punch....3/10
how u gonna rap when u don't believe in flow or structure? complain about votes
u a nusiance so i'm gonna put u off to the side like the place where i mount coats
Decent...but corny....4/10
battle me? a mistake cause i'll leave u I.ncapacitated J.ogging L.ong distances
kid ya talents embarrasing like dad's who bought the wrong christmas gifts
Forced....no...2/10
i know for a fact votes are like sex for u cause not many seem to fall through
low iq? this kid thought swimming in the pool is what made his balls blue
Heh...pretty coo...6/10
defeating me, i'll give u credit for trying but u didn't even come close
paint ya face like a clown by pissin in ya mouth like robutusin with one dose
....No punch...again...2/10
bruce lee..naw, i'll put my "foot" to his "balls" so his words start to "fumble"
i can tell u getting high off that "weed" u scared so ya words start to "tumble"
...Same as above...2/10
how the hell can u not even remember what the fuck is on ya own agenda
hungry, naw...but this man gets stuffed more then turkey's in november
Decent....4/10


Myth's Overall Verse: 25/80
Comments:
You had alot of rhymes with no punches at all...try to work on your concepts better...best line was the blue balls one..and it was pretty good....some of them were decent....but you really need to try to throw a good witty punch in each line...


Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyric
You call that a dope verse? Your skills are less than you think
And this kids 'fucking garbage', guess thats why his shit stinks
Played....3/10
Defended yourself 4 times when I said you sucked so plead the 5th
Tell you the truth that your whack, so I guess I'm killin a myth
Heh....pretty good....6/10
Think he can top me, but he dropped so fuckin weak tho
Only thing more stretched than ya verse...is his fuckin ego
Decent...but played....4/10
I'm rippin this fuckin faggot, how ws his verse? Whack go fig
Tried to read his post, but got distracted by his huge ass sig
lol...7/10
Bitch is droppin played rhymes, weak concepts aint dope
Your so stupid you got 'stuck' with a sliver of hope
Nah...2/10
I been on this site for a week, but I'll rip you to shreads
I was scared of D/R, until I realized you have no friends
Rhymes iffy...but decent...4/10
Mother Fucker is mad weak, you'll never make the grade
'Suckin' up and goin 'down' in History, jus to try and get an A
Ok....3/10


Lyric's Overall Verse: 29/70
Comments:
You didn't come as consistent as I'am accustomed to see you doing....but you still had a couple of nice lines in there...and a majority were decent...with a few anus lines....overall...not bad...not great...


Vote - Lyric
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