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Old 10-18-04, 01:04 PM   #9
Efusive
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Voted For: Myth

Raw Material...

I'm the lyrical earthquake showing you how the tables have turned,
Lyrical STD, come unprotected at me, another mc leaving burned.
shut up with the lyrical garbage, this isnt audio.
wack punch anyways.

It's a real shame, your biggest problem won't be findin' a new name,
My lines to complex your brain, leave you insane, deranged & in pain.
nah.
Yeah, You need an occupation, broke wordplay don't pay fees,
So are you xclusively a pussy, or afraid of madd cow disease?
could of been better.
You're all over Lloyd BANK$, Like U was the High or Low Tide,
Accused of being a homo thug, and you were quickly at his side.
ehh
I got the name, 'cause U already referenced your skills don't exist,
September's Rookie of The Month? No, I guess that's the real Myth.
probably your best.

Myth...

mistake? u stepping to me so now ya getting "processed" like "raw material" *
kid ya rhymes are played like heiroglyphics written by ancient imperials *
nah.
i got the best of both worlds for ya, situated correct, left or right nuts *
man tits? probably be stuffing ya "bra" so ya "tits" look like tight "d cups"
could of been better...ok though
boy i hope u know u fucked up when u decided to step towards my direction
i'm mixed with black and white, he's scared so turns lighter then my complection
blah..
damn, talib's illegitimate son, whew...it's ashame that he left ya *
std? this fags been fucking men so he contracted "crabs" like a "wrestler" *
no.
raw still on a 6 year old's level climbing "trees", dangling from "da branch" *
lance armstrong..naw? my bars give raw testicular cancer like the tour de france
dont like it.
coming out the closet raw shocked us all like the fake gay porn video of banks
arsenio of raps, looks like ya rhymes got u in trouble like high school pranks
blah...
waste of time? why am i even bothering to battle c.ock s.uckers homo-sexual *
michael jackson? i bet other kids really hated growing up right next to u
played and not good.
"raw" u plagerise cause ya unable to come up with ya own "material", that's sad *
i wouldn't be suprised if u was a white kid claiming to have a black dad
wack!

blah battle...both came bad and as if this was audio.
get rid of the explainations of your verse myth makes you
look noobie and serves no purpose, now since this was a text
battle i am going to give this to myth for better concepts
harder punches and a more complex overall verse, now if this
was audio Raw would win if he made his verse a bit longer.
come better next time fellas, good luck witht the battle =/

V/ Myth.
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