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Old 10-18-04, 03:58 PM   #26
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Dopeman Verse
somebody got it twisted about banks bein gay...
it was this fool suckin dick an tap dancin with queers like ballet..
not feelin this ok opener but was weak 2/10

ok, so maybe you got a little ''wit''..
your idea of an open mic is trynna get some ''cock, boy'' like a ken keniff skit!..
tried to add witty i heard the skit its funny but this isnt lines r streeeetched but better then first bar 3/10

shit, you couldnt even clown on a midget..
why? cause ya rhymes are comin up shorter than the zero digit!..
hmm no wasnt feelin it again streeetched 2/10

its time to quit, your dumb trynna claim your quick..
ya so whack, faggot, everyday you gotta change your gimmick..
filler but it was aight 3/10

if ya ''sick'' kid go to the clinic an be treated..
ya gon need to call up 'g-unit' for me to be defeated..
weak but probably best line in the verse 4/10

bitch remain seated, cause ya rhymes aint nothin but a myth..
the reazon your pissed is you n all ya alter egos had a ''lovers tiff''..!
ehh ok descent closer could of been better 4/10


no hate but wasnt feelin it as much as myths 18/60


Myth Verse
the council's got only about an ounce of good talent in it's circle *
i got dopeman scared, trembling, and shaking like a jello commercial
nice i liked this and witty good opener 8/10

this kids use to having his legs spreaded apart like his name is *
suck dick? he'll gladly do it just to do a favor and become famous
eh wasnt really feelin this wen i first read it sounds like a filler but descent 5/10

u can't be a vet cause ya losses are almost equal to half ya wins *
kid plays with balls like soccer players so i'll crack his shins
good personal setup and punch delivered 8/10

this boy done lost his damn mind, he's claiming he's haterproof *
ya skins a bit rough, i'll kill ya and put it to greater use
hmm wasnt feelin this as much 4/10

rematch? naw i'm good one wins enough, i won't spank u like spul did *
dopeman's a fag he done gripped on more balls then spalding
nice i liked this good personal second best bar in my opinion 9/10

my punches and meta's will have u seeing black when ya eyes close
i'm aiming to put out ya career and ambitions like water to pyro's
everything good here nice closer and my favorite bar of the verse 10/103

everything was good here except for a couple of bars but this was kinda one sided battle no hate 44/60

good luck peace