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Old 10-18-04, 06:43 PM   #14
Abraxas
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Both were pretty much god.. but prem came with streched lines..and..
BI: ya shit was good.. not the best but nice overall.. you had some punches that were strong... it was good but some lines were just dumb....like the second to the last bar... i didnt like it.....you had some nice personals...then opening was not as good... and the closing was not as good either......

Prem: nice overall but yours was streched up a lil bit..... and i ddint like the rhymes cheme... not that good... opening was horrible in my thoughs but you came good in the midle and end....nice personals you got that.... but the punches retty much not as good....

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